Thanks for participating! This was a really fun read, honestly. I know you're really into One Piece and I can see a lot of inspiration here (which I don't at all mean as a critique, it's just neat to take note of how there's similarities between your story and your inspirations)!
There are some issues with exposition that doesn't build off of itself/become anything here, despite how fun it was. A lot of this story was a chase with no clear consequences, seeing as the gang was seemingly unarmed aside from snow and, at one point, a rock. If you are at all interested in polishing this story, maybe make the gang members stand out from each other more, and perhaps even have them be more of a threat by having one or two of them reveal that they are armed? Of course, this is just one of many directions you could take it and isn't at all the only valid option! Just wanted to give you a few directions to consider.
I appreciate how "silly" this story was, in a lot of ways, which is where I see a lot of what I assume is inspiration from One Piece. You do a good job establishing Razor's personality despite him having limited moments to show his choices and actions, by making bold choices with him when the opportunities arise (such as having him confront the gang, or making the bold decision to risk his safety at the train tracks). It seems like a simple thing at first glance, but anyone who's tried showing a character's personality in moments where dialogue and interactions with other characters are limited can tell you it takes a lot to establish a character the way you did and keep it consistent! Great job with that!
Thanks again for your participation, stay tuned for winner announcements on Newgrounds and Discord very soon!
LiamRomK
Cool story. Thanks for sending me the prompts earlier.
KingBaller06
That was you? Anytime bro!